The most important measures of a successful sensation novel are
whether it quickens our pulses through thrills and suspense and whether it
keeps its audience reading in breathless anticipation. Judging by the review in
Saturday Review, Verner's Pride falls short of this aim. Why is that?
According to the reviewer, the problem lies "in the often careless writing, the ill-connected
episodes, the profusion of incidents out of which a good plot might have been
elaborated with moderate diligence and thought…" (The Saturday Review
28/2/1863. Source: http://www.mrshenrywood.co.uk /contemporary.html)
The shortcomings of Verner's
Pride seem to be in plotting. There are several sub-plots which do not contribute
to the main chain of events. But I do not consider these the principle reason
why Verner's Pride is not a great
sensation novel. Instead, I would argue that the novel's downfall is in its
failure to squeeze the maximum out of its sensational mysteries. This may be
the influence of traditional melodarama, where fate plays an important role. It
may be a conscious effort on the part of Mrs Henry Wood to stay away from the
cheap thrills of detective fiction, which rely so very blatantly on the
excitement derived from the detection of crime. Or it may simply be that Mrs
Henry Wood has reached the limits of her plotting abilities. Whatever the
reason, despite a very promising plot-arc, there is not enough intrigue,
villainous scheming and hunting down of culprits. Verner's Pride lacks in action to be a truly satisfying sensation
novel. I will try to show why I think this by walking through the plot.
CHAPTERS
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PLOT DEVELOPMENTS
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1-2
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Verners' inheritance is explained (1). Rachel is seen
talking to Lionel (2), Fred and John (1). Rachel has a secret sorrow. (1) Rachel
is found dead. (2)
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3-8
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Mr Verner "investigating systematically" all the
witnesses (5). At the inquest it is revealed that Rachel was pregnant (7). Mr
Verner has "an angry feverish desire to find out" what happened to
Rachel (8). The three young gentlemen of Verner's Pride are the suspects. Mr
Verner interviews all three: "were the accusation brought publicly
against you, you would, none of you, be able to prove a distinct alibi." (8)
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The opening chapters of Verner's
Pride set up a murder mystery and introduce the question of who is the rightful
heir of Verner's Pride. This is a good and exciting start to the novel.
9-11
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Lady Verner, Lionel's mother, brother Jan and sister
Decima are introduced (10). Lucy Tempest arrives at Deerham Court (11).
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12-13
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Sibylla West "loved Frederick Massingbird for
himself, she liked Lionel because he was the heir." (12) John has been
murdered in Australia. (12) Lionel admits he's in love with Sibylla. But
Sibylla will marry Fred Massingbird and go to Australia with him. (13)
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The narrative puts Rachel's fate completely aside and establishes
a different plot-line. It introduces a second set of main characters. Sibylla
West is depicted as a female villain. These chapters set up a very promising
romantic conflict, which promises much intrigue and passion for the rest of the
novel. So far, the narrative has the reader hooked.
14-18
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Mr Verner has changed his will to leave the estate to
Fred, not Lionel (15). Now he signs a codicil to change the will for Lionel's
benefit (16). Mrs Tynn, the housekeeper, and Dr West witness it. The will is
locked inside a desk (16). After Mr Verner dies, the codicil has disappeared
(17).
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19-20
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Lady Verner: "That codicil has been stolen."
Lionel: "From being a landed country gentleman ... I go to a poor fellow
..." (19) Decima suspects Dr West of taking the codicil: "Hence I
drew my deductions." (21) Lionel tells her never to mention these
suspicions again. (21)
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Lionel has lost both his love and his fortune to Fred. There
is a second mystery of the missing codicil with a clear suspect, Dr West. Instead
of actively pursuing the crucial mystery of the codicil, our hero and the
narrative put it aside. Lionel leaves Verner's Pride to live with his mother.
22-24
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There is a riot at Peckaby's shop for bad meat which reveals
Roy's mismanagement of the estate. Lionel intervenes and gets a sun-stroke. (22)
He is nursed by Lucy and talks to her of Sibylla (24). Lucy falls in love
with him. (23).
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25
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Lionel visits the Grinds' cottage - a "lower class
dwelling." Description of rural poverty. "What a lesson for
me!" says Lionel.
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The main plot-line of romantic conflict is developed through
Lionel's obsession with Sibylla and Lucy's developing feelings for him. We are
presented with the issue of rural poverty. This is the first digression from
the main plot.
26
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A packet with Lionel's glove and a note from the late Mr
Verner are found - they are somehow linked to Lionel's loss of inheritance.
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27-28
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Dr West desperately looks for an "important
recipe" in his desk (27) and leaves for abroad "without having
previously informed his daughters." (28)
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29-31
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Fred has died in Australia. (29) Lionel takes over Verner's Pride (30). Jan suggests that
Sibylla married Fred for Verner's Pride and would now happily marry Lionel in
turn (30).
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32-34
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Mrs Verner dies and Lionel comes to his full inheritance (32).
Lionel hints at marriage to Lucy (33). Lionel plans his 'improvements' for
the workers' living conditions (34).
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The narrative recaptures its momentum in a succession of
chapters that remind us of all the main plot lines. There are clues to the two
mysteries: Rachel's death (the glove) and the missing codicil (Dr West's missing
'recipe'). There is also Jan's reminder of the villainous Sibylla. The first
main plot twist gives Lionel his inheritance and makes the mystery of the
codicil irrelevant. It looks like everyone is about to live their lives happily
ever after. But we are only one third into the novel.
35-38
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Sibylla arrives at Verner's Pride: "Oh Lionel! - you
will give me a home, won't you?" (35) Lionel ask Sibylla to marry him (36)
in a moment of passion. Lady Verner is upset: "Were you mad?" She
asked in a whisper." "That woman has worked his ruin." (37)
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39
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Brother Jarrum preaches at Peckabys shop of the earthly
paradise of Mormons.
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40-41
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Lionel marries Sibylla (41) "Lionel, in his heart of
hearts, doubting if he did not best love Lucy Tempest." (41) Brother
Jarrum disappears with his followers. Susan Peckaby is left behind but told a
story of a white donkey that would fetch her. (41)
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Sibylla returns and triumphs. Chapters 35 and 36 are among
the high points of the plot. It is accompanied with the digressive story about
Brother Jarrum and his preaching. Marriage and the position of wives are much
discussed. Perhaps this is intended to form a commentary on Sibylla's life as
Lionel's wife.
42
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Sibylla spends Lionel's money. Mrs Roy, expecting to go
with Brother Jarrum, confesses to the vicar that "it was Frederick
Massingbird who had been quarrelling with Rachel that night by the Willow
Pond." Lionel and the Reverend agree that "It can do no good to
reap up the sad tale." "Let us bury Mrs Roy's story between us, and
forget it, so far as we can."
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43
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Lucy and Lionel recognize their feelings for each other
and their hopeless situation. "Lucy sat down as the door closed behind
him and wondered how she should get through the long dreary life before
her." For Lionel: "The sense of dishonour was stifling him."
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44-45
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Susan Peckaby waits for the white donkey (44) and the
Peckabys discuss life with multiple wives (45). "Lionel had awoke to the
conviction, firm and undoubted, that his wife did not love him." (45)
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46
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September 12-14 months later. About Sibylla: "Her
extravagance was something frightful ..." Lionel sees financial
"embarrassment" approaching fast. Alice Hook, "little more
than a child," has "got herself in trouble." Cramped living
conditions are blamed. Lionel compares them to Verner's Pride and "I
feel as if the girl's blight lay at my own door!"
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Chapter 42 is a strange turn of a plot and a disappointment:
it dismisses the initial mystery that played such a major part at the beginning
of the novel. Just like earlier Lionel dismissed any suspicions relating to Dr
West, he now firmly puts away the new information relating to Rachel's death. The
hero of the story is determined to avoid all attempts to resolve the main
mysteries driving the plot.
The following three chapters develop further the romantic
conflict between Sibylla, Lionel and Lucy. This theme is well established and
although it provides melodramatic scenes of longing and yearning, it is
becoming laboured. Chapter 46 is part of the social commentary in the novel
contrasting the living conditions of Alice Hook with those of Sibylla Verner -
and thereby also comparing their moral conduct. At this stage of the narrative
we have lost much of the momentum; there are no unanswered burning questions,
nor much foreshadowing, to help us anticipate future revelations. We are
approaching midway of the novel, and the narrative is distinctly losing its
pace.
47-53
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Lucy spots a man lurking under a yew-tree watching
Verner's Pride. Dan Duff bursts into her mother's shop, shouting "I
see'd a dead man." (48) Sibylla tells Lionel: "I look upon Verner's
Pride as mine, more than yours; if it had not been for the death of my
husband, you would never have had it." (50) Dan Duff (51), Matthew Frost
(52) and Rev Bourne (53) all say they have seen the ghost of Fred Massingbird.
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54-55
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A careful description of Alice Hook's dismal sleeping
arrangements. (54) Sibylla and Lionel argue over a pair of grey ponies. (55)
Lionel refers to the conditions of the Hooks. Sibylla hints that Lionel is to
blame for Rachel. "He did not know what she meant." (55)
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56-57
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Lionel and Jan decide that the ghost is Fred: "I
fancy it will turn out that he did not die in Australia." But "Why
did he not appear openly?" (56) Lionel sees someone under the yew-tree (58):
"He would have sacrificed his life willingly to save Sibylla from the
terrible misfortune that appeared to be falling upon her." (58)
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Just as we were losing our faith with the narrative, it treats
us to the terrible threat of bigamy. This is done slowly and cumbersomely; it
takes several chapters to move from the vague ghost at Willow Pond to the clear
and present danger that Fred Massingbird is alive and hiding in the
neighbourhood. Once this threat is established, it gives great scope for
melodrama. In chapter 54, the description of Hooks' bedchamber with its
potential for illicit (and incestuous) sex appears out of place, but it prepares the ground for
Lionel's argument with Sibylla and her mention of Rachel. Still, it makes for a
clonky read.
59-64
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Lionel goes to London in search of Captain Cannonby, who
knew Fred Massingbird in Australia. (59) Instead, he comes across a woman who
was helped by someone called Massingbird returning from Australia. (59) Lionel
goes to see Lady Verner and Lucy: "he must be a man isolated from other
wedded ties, so long as Sibylla remained on the earth." (64)
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In chapter 59 Lionel performs his one single act of trying
to resolve the mystery so critical to his marriage and his inheritance. It also
contains the only scenes in the book that take place outside of the tight rural
confines of Verner's Pride and Deerham. Lionel fails in his task. The only result
of his trip to London is to confirm that a man calling himself Massingbird has
returned from Australia. This is a clue and
comes as a result of an unlikely coincidence. As the narrator puts it almost
apologetically: "Does anything
in this world happen by chance? What secret unknown impulse could have sent
Lionel Verner on board that steamer?" (Verner's
Pride, Chapter 59). Coincidence, in a mystery plot, is a very dangerous
tool to use; it seldom does its job convincingly. But it is a stock device of
melodrama and fully in line with its moral universe controlled by fate.
65-67
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Captain Cannonby arrives to confirm that Fred is dead. (65)
Jan captures the ghost. It is John Massingbird. (66) "And so the mystery
was out." John has been hiding until he knew whether the codicil had
been found: "He would personate his brother ... [who] ... has neither
creditors nor enemies." (67)
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68-73
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Lionel is in debt: "We have no furniture - no money
in short, to set up a house, or to keep it on." "[Sibylla] cried,
she sobbed, she protested, she stormed, she raved." They move to Deerham
Court. (70)
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74
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The Deerham husbands play a nasty practical joke on Susan
Peckaby with a white-washed donkey.
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Coincidences pile up. The "mystery was out"
without any effort by anyone. There is another turn in Lionel's fortunes:
Verner's Pride is lost again as it passes to John. Chapter 74 is a digression
to close the sub-plot of Susan Peckaby and the Mormons. Its placement here in
the narrative may be due to the dictates of serial publishing, or it may be to
serve as a parallel to Sibylla's fall to relative poverty.
75-78
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Sibylla accuses Lionel directly of doing "injury to
Rachel." Lionel has no idea what she means. (75) Dr West returns and looks for the mysterious
missing 'recipe.' (76) Dr West warns Sibylla of delicate health. Sibylla says
"if that codicil could be found it would save my life. ... I want to go
back to Verner's Pride."(77)
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79-80
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John asks why Mr Verner left "the place away
from" Lionel. Lionel tells him of the glove and a note. (79) First Matthew
Frost on his death bed (80), then John (80) tell Lionel that Fred was
responsible for Rachel. (80) John says that he "learned it from Luke Roy"
who saw Rachel and Fred at the pond. But Fred did not murder Rachel: "He
had made vows to the girl, and broken them; and that was the extent of
it." (80)
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81
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Sibylla has consumption. Fred told Sibylla that
"Rachel owed her disgrace to Lionel." Lionel is shocked that
Sibylla had married a man she thought was a murderer. (81)
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Rachel's death is solved in passing. This resolution to the
big mystery set up at the beginning of the narrative is removed with a disappointing lack of sensation. The truth was known to
Rachel's family and to John Massingbird all along. Both this mystery and the
second one of the codicil, which has become relevant again since John's
arrival, are now linked to Sibylla's character. Her greed is revealed by her
willingness to marry a man she thought had killed Rachel and by her physical
health, her very existence, depending on regaining Verner's Pride.
82-87
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Sibylla appears at a ball looking "like a bedecked
skeleton." She insists on dancing the waltz. "That had been her
last dance one earth."(86) Sibylla dies. (87)
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88
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Lionel is still unable to marry Lucy "I am in debt.
Such a man cannot marry." "Oh, Lucy! Forgive - forgive me!"
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89
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Jan's medical assistant blows up his chemical experiment
and as a result of the blast the missing codicil falls out of Dr West's old
locked bureau. (89)
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90
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Lionel starts his improvements. John tells Lionel he handed
Lionel's glove to Mr Verner: it "slipped out in self-defence" so
that Mr Verner would believe John innocent and let him depart for Australia,
"never thinking it could have been so important ... All could have been
so different, Lionel could've been happy."
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91-95
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Lionel asks Col Tempest for Lucy's hand. (94)
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The final chapters wrap matters up in a quick series of plot
twists. Although Sibylla's dramatic and somewhat convenient death frees Lionel for Lucy, his debts do
not. We need a fortunate explosion to reveal Dr West's crime, and the mystery
of the codicil is cleared up. Finally, the small mystery of the glove is
explained by John, and we learn the reason why Mr Verner changed his will in
the first place to start the whole roller coaster ride of Lionel's fortunes.
In Chapter 57 the novel attempts to enlist our sympathies
for Lionel's mental state. Here is revealed the main shortcoming of the plot:
"how could it be possible to set the question at
rest?" "By a very simple process, it may be answered - the waiting
for time and chance. Ay, but do you know what that waiting involves, in a case
like this? Think of the state of mind that Lionel Verner must live under during
the suspense!" (Verner's Pride,
Chapter 57).
This describes exactly what the novel does; the unanswered
questions that power the plot forward are resolved by coincidence and by
characters finally deciding to tell unprompted something they have known a long
time. Mysteries and conflicts critical to the plot are solved by time and
chance instead of action on the part of the characters. We have to wait for matters
to resolve themselves, like Lionel, in suspense. Unfortunately, we do not have
his gentlemanly fortitude.
The narrative effectively uses mysteries to kick off and
drive the plot, but beyond this, it does not display sufficient effort and
desire to resolve them through action. Our hero Lionel has lost his inheritance
mysteriously. He has clues of the glove and the suspicions about Dr West. He is
married to Sibylla who is squandering his fortune and is possibly a bigamist. Sibylla
accuses him of Rachel's death. Really, he is desperately in love with Lucy. And
yet, in the middle of all these sensational calamities, Lionel takes no action
at all to tackle them. He is too much of a gentleman to get his hands dirty in
ferreting out secrets. This is the downfall of Verner's Pride as a sensation novel.
This conclusion may well reflect my view as a modern reader
who is overly-familiar with the genre conventions of detective fiction. But
judging by the less than enthusiastic reception of Verner's Pride in 1863, perhaps Mrs Henry Wood's contemporary
readers felt the same way.